Good stuff, I says.
I really like the lead synth. The sound itself is soft while the song it plays is energetic. I can't say the same for the other lead instrument, though, whatever that bass effect is, I'm not liking it much. The rhythm is nice and fits the song well. Also, the song seems to run on a bit...like it needs some sort of breakdown to keep it from running consistently for too long.
Anyways, enough criticism. Pretty good.
thank you?
Thank you for the first good song of the day!
As far as constructive criticism...
1. Take out the Bass Hit during the breakdown. (2:11)
2. Add a Delay effect to the final piano note of the song.
3. I guess I don't have a third one.
Great song, dude! So great, in fact, I just might have to d/l it and listen to it on my own time. Look forward to the finalized version.
Yeah I noticed that misplaced kick hit XD, definitely need to fix that.
I should have it finished by next week... production is going to be the hardest part of this song...
Thanks for the review!
Damn boy, ya done good!
I've read a couple reviews, and I've seen a bit of comments on the vocals. Let it be know that I don't dislike them, I just believe they're way overpowering, taking away from the instrumental work. Vocals are an instrument the same, so even that shit out, and keep up the good, straight up metal work.
Oh, and is it just me, or is there a lack of bass. I'm using crappy laptop speakers, so I might just be missing out due to that.
Had me laughing and headbanging at the same time!
...and now my jaw and neck hurts.
Nice metal work. I dunno what program you used to record your work, but it's 10 times better than the one I use...A mike and a program that starts with an "A".
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Great Phantasm