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Don't call a Dean guitar tacky!!!

The best guitar I've ever touched is a metallic orange Dean Hardtail, and I am now the proud owner of it.

Anyways, awesome riffs. Would be awesome to hear some drums behind it. What recording program are you using? It's not fantastic, but much better than the recorder on my phone that I use.

Also, I definitely can see a snow covered mountainous environment with this song. Do yourself a favor and keep the note arrangement as it is, as I cannot see any room for improvement without changing the mood of the song.

WhiteChocolateBunny responds:

Thanks man, I am using a Line 6 Spider Jam for the drum click. I wrote this in stream of conscious, so improvement on a work like this is pretty difficult. I'll get a better drum track, install a better recording program...

And I won't be calling my Deansky tacky lmao

I'm no pro, but...

If you think your work is "Dull", then it might be due to the same reasons a buddy of mine thought the same of his work.

First off, everything in this song is in fourths. No I don't mean that the rhythm is 4 beats per measure, but every part of the music repeats four times, then changes ever so slightly. Mix it up more.

Also, this song is very safe. I don't really know how you'd go about changing it, but don't be afraid to take advice from the songs that inspire you.

Anyways, it's not bad, so don't beat yourself up over it. =)

Pand3mic responds:

yea this was a bad effort. i should spend a few days next time. this was like 30 mins

Wow, not what I was expecting.

Awesome remix. Don't have much more to say, other than the song's theme is kinda stupid. "You're like a sugar rush". Been there, done that, and don't think I'd ever compare it to a person...unless she's singing to a can of Mountain Dew. THAT would make perfect sense.

z0di4c responds:

LOL xD I liked how you commented on the lyrical content rather than my producton haha. But thanks haha

Who gave this a "0"?!?!

I'm sick of punks who run through the new submissions board and drop Zeros...both those who do so to songs of a different genre than they're used to or without acknowlegement of skill. This song, with it's slow rythem and lead in 3 beats per measure, is good. I love the dark feel, too. the only complaint is how repetitive it is towards the end...a breakdown 2/3 into the song might fix that. Keep up the good work! 8/10 4/5

HarvestThrone responds:

Thanks! And I agree -_- People can be annoying, but oh well. Anyway, yeah it's still something I'm probably going to go back to and fix a few things here and there I think, and I'll definitely take what you've said into consideration. Wouldn't want people falling asleep on me. I actually mispelled the title now that I look at it...*sighs* -_- Anyway, thanks again!

Almost there.

I see how your were trying to achieve that Industrial sound, and I'd say that you were close, but it felt too mid heavy. Add some deeper bass hits and some higher pitched metal on metal clangs, and I think you'd be closer to a professional industrial sound than you are now. Just my opinion, though.

zomgkerrie responds:

i definitely hear you on that. i am trying to expand my sound out of the mid range to include more highs and more lows in the bass especially. thanks so much for taking the time to listen!!!

Well, I listened to the whole thing through...

...and it just didn't seem like it needed the bass hit. The techno/trance hit took away from what seemed more like a more (emotionally) powerful, ambient/symphonic song. I like what was done at the 2:41 mark, though. Not much I'd change there.

I don't think it deserves the 2/5 that some are giving it. Sure, it needs some work, but I can tell that some effort and talent went into this.

3/5, 7/10.

zomgkerrie responds:

thank you so much for listening to it the whole way through....i think i tried too hard with the combining of genres: the techno and classical.....it does sound a tad rough. i'm glad you liked it at 2:41. that's my favorite part too. i know i'm sad that it is getting 2's. i would fairly put it at a 3. i rarely give out 2's unless it seriously makes my ears hurt. thank you so much for the fair review and the time to listen:D
Kerrie

Lmao!!!

When I opened this song, the visualization was that of the tank riding over and through hills, and after reading your comment and watching the tank again, all I could think about was that very tank guy incredibly happy running over live, wild babies and domestic kittens.

Oh, and I like the song.

thatguy669606 responds:

lol your review made me laugh for quite a bit..."live, wild babies and domestic kittens" ???

lol nice
thanks for the review bro

oh and i totally see what you mean

Thank you for the first good song of the day!

As far as constructive criticism...

1. Take out the Bass Hit during the breakdown. (2:11)

2. Add a Delay effect to the final piano note of the song.

3. I guess I don't have a third one.

Great song, dude! So great, in fact, I just might have to d/l it and listen to it on my own time. Look forward to the finalized version.

DomesticTerrorist responds:

Yeah I noticed that misplaced kick hit XD, definitely need to fix that.

I should have it finished by next week... production is going to be the hardest part of this song...

Thanks for the review!

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