Thank you for the first good song of the day!
As far as constructive criticism...
1. Take out the Bass Hit during the breakdown. (2:11)
2. Add a Delay effect to the final piano note of the song.
3. I guess I don't have a third one.
Great song, dude! So great, in fact, I just might have to d/l it and listen to it on my own time. Look forward to the finalized version.